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ThisIsWhatYouDidToMe

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You know what?
I give up
You've broken me
Left pieces of me shattered on the ground
And no one's left to pick them up

You know what?
I'm tired
Of getting hurt
Spending my nights crying
Washing my make up off with tears

You know what?
Dreams
They are movies
Films of what we want
Of what we fear but don't think about

You know what?
You did this
It has happened
My heart has cracked
And no matter what you do, it will never heal again
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Just gotten over my writer's block so this isn't the best.

Some critique would be nice (:

*edit*
Oh! Also, this was written under the watchful eye of ~immortal-rain-soul. Just thought you'd like to know that she is an absolutely AMAZING writer (:
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That is really well written.
It's really strong, I love it (:
:heart: