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How I feel
My feelings for you is that you're one of kind
My feelings for you is that you're an amazing person who has a great personality
My feeling for you is that you make me feel happy when I am sad
My feelings for is that you always know what to say and what do when try you try best
My feelings for you is that I love you
I love you so much and I don't care if don't have feelings for me
I love you for who you are and I will still love you no matter what you are
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Cherished
She persuades him to lie down and be still for her
Naked in body only,
her eyes peer past the whole to the pieces.
She squeezes his breasts
Sweet, ripe little things
How they ache for her.
Curious hands become gentle fingers
Sliding up his throat
knuckles rasping against stubble
Skating across his forehead smoothing furrows.
Press gently on the delicate skin at the edges of his eyes
Follow down between the eyebrows
The straight line of his nose
Stroking soft lips that part in hungry expectancy.
She stretches his arms above his head, palms up.
Traces with spider legs down his shivering skin
Tickles the hair of his armpits
Nuzzling her
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the trees change
soft gray sunset
fluttering limbs like trunks in the breeze
banana leafs shuffle,
a yellow-green wave
dyed with the thought of rain
the blue of cloud and steel holding back
the bowl of blackberries and milk, a teaspoon of sugar
crosshatched where the birch-hairs twine
in overlapping lines scrawled above
the white bodies turn brown
stretched from molten crucible
into blown gestures
faint suggestions to the wind
the upside-down birdcages
unfurl near the brim
their arms splitting and
growing barbs like battle maces
when the leaves carve away
the paper bark shivers,
leafs, electric on the stem
the shadow from the trunk bleeds
and stains the b
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Ah, nicely summed up. 
I like how you've used ellipses to emphasise the trailing off and how life doesn't end simply because you end life on Earth... it can carry on in the spiritual world as well, if that makes sense?
The concept is well portrayed and the phrasing isn't too bad, either. I like the way you've described it.
I like how you've used ellipses to emphasise the trailing off and how life doesn't end simply because you end life on Earth... it can carry on in the spiritual world as well, if that makes sense?
The concept is well portrayed and the phrasing isn't too bad, either. I like the way you've described it.